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Come on my love, let us dance

Dance in the dawn of change

Dance in the mist of sorrow

Dance in the rain of tears

Dance in the lake of tomorrow

Come on my love, let us dance forever
Yeeey deep emotional poem 4am on the morning~ : D this one reminds me of a song, can't remember the name though..

Anyway I hope you like it xD as always this is made from my own emotions~
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Jenny42 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This lovely poem matches your art style, so free and flowing, I love it!
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Penzone Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
Aw ;w; that makes me so happy to hear, that my being reflects in both my art and poems
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awsomeworld125 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
:aww: this is soo cute!!!
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Penzone Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
Thanks again:aww: hehe
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awsomeworld125 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2010
u welcome! ^_^
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MysticFairytales Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010
kan du kanske förklara lite mer vad du tänkte när du skrev den? :meow:
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Penzone Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010
Hmm jag minns inte så bra XD men jag brukar dagdrömma när jag skriver dem, temat för den här var "ibland är det bäst att ha kvar drömmar som just drömmar" :aww: kanske som du känner med Jess?
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MysticFairytales Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010
hehe ja det tog ett tag för mig att kolla på den ^^; man får så mycket att gå igenom när man är med i olika grupper så vissa bilder hamnar långt bak och så ser man dem inte förrän det har gått jätte lång tid :ohnoes: plus att jag är lat :XD:
men ok jag tror jag förstår vad du menar :) men vad exakt var det du dagdrömde om här då, eller kanske snarare om vem? :meow:
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Penzone Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010
Det är okay XD hmm jag dagdrömde om kärlek :3 om lycka och frihet~ om blått, vitt och grönt^^
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MysticFairytales Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2010
hmm...ok, blått, vitt och grönt? =P
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Penzone Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010
japp~ : D
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MysticFairytales Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2010
ok spännande ;P
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Penzone Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
^^
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My-hands-are-bananas Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010
THAT IS SO GOOD 8D
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
Thank you very much!:aww:
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weida34 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010  Hobbyist
nice :)
i like how it flows
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
thanks a lot!:)
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weida34 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010  Hobbyist
np :)
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XNoNNX Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010
Poems...
Can't get enoough of them.
:)
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010
Why thank you!:D I'm glad you enjoy my little poems^^
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XNoNNX Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010
:) You're welcome
:D
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TsukiTay Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice, especially for a short poem ^_^ I'm glad other people other than me actually write poetry on deviantart :D
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
Thank you very much!:D I've read your most recent and it's very good!^^ if you liked this one then I recommend reading my other ones ;3
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TsukiTay Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh well thank-you! ^_^ Ok, I will read ur other poems too then :)
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
Ohh awesome:) tell me what you think about them~
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Seraphi91 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
It's a very beautiful little poem.:aww:
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
Thanks hun:hug: very glad you think so
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C-Conztantine Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
AAAAAAWW what a cute poem :3
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
Tackar~ ^3^ hihi kanske inte min bästa men den ville ut ur mitt huvud xD
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C-Conztantine Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
awesome X''D
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Ospi2ki Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist
MILK DANCE
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
DANCE OSPI DANCE
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Ospi2ki Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist
YAY!
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
Dance. :iconimragingplz:
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Ospi2ki Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist
ToT ok ...*dance scared*
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
-watches- :iconyeyplz:
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Ospi2ki Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Hobbyist
-stop- :iconwthplz: don't look at me
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
Dance more~ :iconraepfaceplz:
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Foxflake Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
That' so beautiful :D
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
Thanks a lot!:D
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Foxflake Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
You're welcome :D
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downpoured Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010   Photographer
Hmmm is the right word "vacker"? :meow:
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
That depends on what you want to say:meow: right now you said it was beautiful:D so thank yo very much:hug:
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downpoured Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010   Photographer
Exactly what I meant to say :aww: :glomp:
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010
:iconspazhugplz: >w<
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Ahimay-Sokamu Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty! <3
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
Thank youuu~:love:
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Woaska Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
GAAAH :heart:

Den är så fin, känns som varje mening symboliserar ett steg i en relation med en älskande.

"Fears" kom jag på skulle vara något man kan rimma på till tears, men den blev så bra som den blev ändå. :love:
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Penzone Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
Tack igen!:glomp: ja dem olika raderna är olika steg i en relation ;3 eller tankesätt, och det är ett ganska bra ord xD men det har så negativ klang~
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